the title in the dark corner is a disorder that is nothing compared with the errors that follow. There is a mismatch in the first paragraph when he says "should be in place" and refers to "The system of harnessing wind energy." The second paragraph uses an undefined nothing remains clear: "they know of it should provide "and do not know whether it is wind investment mentioned above or ethanol indicated later ... Now that he" must provide "a hypothesis so far, after two or three years has been in nothing. It seems he would say "the same dress and shoes" but here would fit better if I said "that could provide ..." then used the relative who had to use when they , because it is a proposition in detail and finally commits a redundancy to talk about a new future , as if there might be one already used.
already see that when you start bad, you end up worse.
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